I always knew this trailer was too short as I had originally written it. I just didn't know what I needed to make it longer.
That's why I have been thinking a lot recently. As I recently posted, I could add scenes where people's minds are playing tricks on them. Maybe the villain attacks someone and does nothing as he is looking for someone else. Maybe we can hear some of the conversations between the two security guards.
As I have said, it needs to be longer, without giving away too much of the plot. I don't want any plot twists revealed or anything that would be spoilers for the audience. If you want someone to watch a movie, you can't give the audience everything, or they'll have no reason to go.
That's why I have been thinking a lot recently. As I recently posted, I could add scenes where people's minds are playing tricks on them. Maybe the villain attacks someone and does nothing as he is looking for someone else. Maybe we can hear some of the conversations between the two security guards.
As I have said, it needs to be longer, without giving away too much of the plot. I don't want any plot twists revealed or anything that would be spoilers for the audience. If you want someone to watch a movie, you can't give the audience everything, or they'll have no reason to go.